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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-01-10 09:57 AM



Pleasured Heights

Pacing, caged footsteps stagger gait
Laying wait, of freedom’s satin touch
Moving through me fire storm
Every breath, born of desire warm
Insatiable, the rise and fall
Whirling dervish to recall
Higher, ever higher

The plains below
On wings bestow inspire
Pacing, long awaited change
Entwine of mind the fullest range
And songs that resonate the flesh
Lifting voice renewed and fresh
As fruit, so succulent and ripe
Juices flow, as liquid fire in delight

A mountain scene, and seen to rise
Of grace to tender spark my eyes
For love was pent, held incontent
Until the moment you were sent
And journeys meld the pop of fission high
Pacing corridors, in urgent cry
Then take the sun, submerged inside
For you reclaim the sky, once earth denied

Copyright Kkh 1/10/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2008-01-10 10:00 AM


gosh! You do have a beautiful way with words!

marcel
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2 posted 2008-01-10 06:58 PM


love this romantic look.....beautifully painted as always.....
Magnus
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3 posted 2008-01-10 08:18 PM


I think of Noah and the ark when I read parts
of this....anywhoo, very well written, and
your rhyme is superbly placed, as always...

Hi KIddo....

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-01-11 10:26 AM


Wonderful write, TD! True inspirational heights.

love,
Margherita

Kahlil
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5 posted 2008-01-12 09:20 AM


You so masterfully construct these beauties,
so beautifully worded in sound and imagery.
I enjoyed reading this aloud and hearing it.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-01-12 05:06 PM


enjoyed...James
SmartChick
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7 posted 2008-01-12 05:15 PM


This is just beautiful, Kathleen.
Honeybunch
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8 posted 2008-01-13 05:21 PM


Yes, your words do indeed paint a beautiful picture.
Jaime Fradera
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9 posted 2008-01-18 09:17 PM


In a very sensual mood,
I had to come back to read this again, and copy it for times when I feel too lonely.
Jaime

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