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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-01-10 08:13 AM



I am sad
I am crying
My tears are falling
From a loss that wasn't mine
But yet I feel the pain
A father
A friend
No more to see his smiling face
No more to share his laughter new
Just gone
Gone before his time
With no words to grace our days


For my friend who lost his father... tears are flowing  RDB




Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-10 09:18 AM


Gone before his time
With no words to grace our days


So sad indeed. May the family find comfort in the thought that the  connection of love will continue to be felt in the hearts.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

passing shadows
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2 posted 2008-01-10 09:30 AM


awww Roniece, I'm so sorry for the loss

let him know he's in my prayers as you are too



Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2008-01-10 11:06 AM


Heart hugs hon.  
vandana
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4 posted 2008-01-10 05:55 PM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-01-11 07:14 AM


There is comfort in the concern you have shared through your words...James
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6 posted 2008-01-12 01:12 AM


Darling friend,

I am feeling your sadness and loss.  A beautiful poem you write so well -- you and your friend are in my thoughts.

Love and hugs,
Ali

TomMark
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7 posted 2008-01-12 01:42 AM


I am just feeling the same thing. I Have cried many times lately for a dear friend. Sometimes  I think that life could be easier if I had no feelings at all.

Still, let the tears out and let those good memories become part of strength to face life.




SmartChick
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8 posted 2008-01-12 05:21 PM


Awwww, this is so sad.
Balladeer
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9 posted 2008-01-13 12:15 PM


I'm very sorry for your friend's loss
Honeybunch
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10 posted 2008-01-13 05:10 PM


Always such a sad time and a friend's loss is always ours as well.  Memories are such precious things and I'm sure there are many to sustain those left behind.  My sincere condolences.

Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-01-14 05:18 AM


thank you each and every one of you, my treasured heartfelt friends.... I am grateful for your kind words ... love RDB

I know he rests in peace, alone, yet not alone..

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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