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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-01-07 06:28 PM


       the lost

we are…

clouds in fleeting
  dance
along the Winter
  hills

wandering spectres
in the twilight mists,
and voiceless winds
  of Time

temporal guests
of an amaranthine
  moon

ever-reaching for the
finest Elysian dreams
of love and truth,
point and purpose,
with our snares of
complex ignorance…

grasping only air!



© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2008-01-07 06:37 PM


beautiful. and sigh!!!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-01-07 08:36 PM


yes! I'm sighing too!  just beautiful Bruce... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-01-07 09:02 PM


Lovely, deep thinking, Maybe there is hope for us in our complex ignorance after all.
                                     Ida
                

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2008-01-07 10:40 PM


then every so often, the fleet foot of fate, snatched by the forelock.
Happy New Year!

aziza
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5 posted 2008-01-13 04:15 PM


Bruce,

As I admire the beauty that you write, I am lost in thought over your message -- and that, Bruce, makes a poem worth saving.  And, I am saving this.

Alison

surrealpoetics
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since 2008-01-13
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6 posted 2008-01-14 03:30 AM


verily, a reflection of my innermost self's contemplations...

you now have a great admirer of your works

~Valdron~

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