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The Fire Within
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The Fire Within |
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benjamin106 Junior Member
since 2008-01-05
Posts 10 |
The feeling is so much making my skin hot my cheeks blush and my fingers tingle as I get that much hotter inside Her memory makes me weak like a tear on fire sliding down my soul igniting my passion thinking about her smile in front of me She will forever be a part of me a fire within touching my beating heart her warm touch always a breath away I've said hello everday with my eyes closed and arms around her picture just wishing she could make me melt. Benjamin Prins 2008 |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Ben, I loved this: "like a tear on fire sliding down my soul " Very strong imagery conjured up with so few words. Well done and welcome to the Pip family. Look forward to seeing more of your work John |
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benjamin106 Junior Member
since 2008-01-05
Posts 10 |
You will see more of my work soon, I am 24, have 2 books published, and just about done my 3rd. I'm always writing. I've been told I have a beautiful mind. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Smiles... a beautiful mind indeed Benjamin.. I look forward to reading more of your lovely work! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bleeding Ink Junior Member
since 2007-11-12
Posts 31 |
Hot! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
and a beautiful soul as well! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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