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Open Poetry #41

Lily's Walk (Haiku)

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2008-01-07 03:21 PM

Lily’s Walk

first star this dark night
Lily’s walk close to a run
dog bed next to fire

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2008-01-07 05:55 PM

Lily is cute!
Cold nights inspire a run-not-walk attitude.

Clang
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since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

2 posted 2008-01-07 07:51 PM

You have a beautiful baby, too. I take my girl (blue heeler)and my ex's dog walking in the local dog park every chance I get. I don't know what I'll do without her. She's 14 this year.

Great write BTW.

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

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az, usa

3 posted 2008-01-10 06:41 PM

yes....pet's know their comfort......

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2008-01-11 06:55 AM

Sweet Lily! A lovely write.

love,
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

5 posted 2008-01-11 10:15 AM

Thank you all for your sweet responses. We adore our Lily girl who loves to curl up by the fire!
hugs, Marti

Life is a celebration of awakenings,
of new beginnings, and wonderful surprises that enlighten the soul.
--Cielo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

6 posted 2008-01-13 06:28 PM

Marti, you conjured up so many pleasant images and sensations with this precious write.

Lily's eyes look human! Spell-binding look into the soul of your beloved pet!

Linda

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