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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-01-07 02:11 PM


Not Ready

"In a weak moment,
I tried to say goodbye,
but I couldn't do it,
I couldn't say goodbye."...

I know that every relationship
has a beginning and an end,
a hello and a goodbye, but in
this relationship I'm thankful that
you're not ready to say goodbye
and neither am I.

JamesLee
06January
2008





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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-07 06:41 PM


who could ever say goodbye to you gorgeous boy James!  nicely expressed  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-01-08 04:02 PM


Thank you Roniece for the nice response...
they have managed...James

marcel
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3 posted 2008-01-10 06:40 PM


I have definitely been there, more than once....the truth and answer, are eventualities.......
Khe Iem
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4 posted 2008-01-10 09:16 PM


It's nice and simple. I loved it. Khe Iem
Bobby Jordan
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5 posted 2008-01-10 10:17 PM


JamesMichael,

Never say goodbye, the meaning really doesn't exist.  There will be another day, and once met, always remembered.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-01-11 03:43 PM


Thank you marcel, Khe lem and Bobby for the wonderful responses...
I hope this is a relationship that goes on forever, if not, is there an almost forever...James

aziza
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7 posted 2008-01-13 06:16 PM


I hope that you both never say goodbye in the relationship you share.  

Alison

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