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benjamin106
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since 2008-01-05
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0 posted 2008-01-06 05:50 PM





  You wake up
  opening your sleepy eyes
  thinking of your life
  and all that you have accomplished
  in this beautiful world we call home.
  Your family
  close friends
  everyone that believes in you
  all care about you
  enough to love everything you do.
  Staring into a new day
  the air feels fresh
  as you smile and stretch
  feeling good about yourself
  welcoming anything coming to you.


  Walking through the park
  smelling a rose
  smiling at strangers
  knowing that you will always be
  amazing to everybody you meet.

Benjamin Prins  2008

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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-01-06 05:55 PM


wonderful, wonderful poem. Love it.
Have a wonderful Sunday. Sir!!

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-01-06 06:26 PM


Nice...James
EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2008-01-06 06:42 PM


<3
Goldenrose
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4 posted 2008-01-06 07:23 PM


Well like the title this is amazing..such closely observed devotion..thank you for sharing..

Goldenrose.

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