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sarahsong7
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since 2007-12-14
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0 posted 2008-01-06 10:43 AM



I see myself when I'm old and gray,
sitting on the porch of my gabled roof.


Looking across the long grass that sways in the

breeze, beyond the tulips, wild roses,
and dancing lilies.


I see the newest addition of foals,frolicking in

the gentle wind and raindrops of spring.


I see the fruit trees forming this year's crop.


I see the strand of young trees forming their new

leaves to shade the seasonal creek.


I see the geese and ducks swimming in the spring-

fed pond where a large bass just madeĀ its own

ripples amongst the newly formed cattails.


I see a swarm of colors including buffs mingling
and pecking with their rooster, scratching up the
insects in the newly planted garden,reminding me

that I forgot to close the gate again.


I look to the left and see all the newborn calves

laying about and sleeping off the sun.


I look to the right and see where some goats have

mingled amongst the sheep that surround the closed
in nut trees, realizing now which ones I need to

cull out.


I look back upon the porch of which I am sitting,
thinking that the break is over and it's time to

get back to work.
I smell the different flavor of odors that fill

the air.


I know that this is my perfect life,sitting on the
porch of my gable roof.


Then I awake.


I realize that this was all just a dream.


Or was it?


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-01-06 03:20 PM


I hope not. This is a fine dream for me too.
                                   Ida

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