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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Where are you? I ponder in rubbed eye darkness of unfurling night. Strain of life does not wear on me, i face it down, but hearts are different. Precious and fleeting as dew drop jewels in a morning of flawless winsomeness, faultless. Inside the core of your heart like an aureate woodland, Picking the rich fruits of your sentimental harvest, offering you my bounty. Refreshed by breezes, breathing life into bodies of love, of weeping warmth. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
but hearts are different. Precious and fleeting as dew drop jewels in a morning of flawless winsomeness, faultless. You express your heart's tune in such a strongly captivating way, dear Phil. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am particularly fond of the heart images: as "Precious and fleeting ...dew drop jewels" and as an "aureate woodland..." Also, the fine ending: "...breezes, breathing life into bodies of love, of weeping warmth. Applause! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now THAT'S what I call passionate! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
overflowing with passion....very intoxicating....   ~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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