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aziza
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0 posted 2008-01-04 11:22 PM


Whispers to Cade

Whisper my love to that part of you sleeping
Whisper my love to the heart of you still fighting
Whisper my love to the very soul of you
Whisper my love to our friendship
Whisper it softly to brush your closed eyes

Whisper my prayers to blanket your pain
Whisper my prayers for the light within you
Whisper my prayers to your courage
Whisper my prayers to your renewed life
Whisper them softly to help you find the way home

Whisper my words to soothe your worries
Whisper my song to throw your windows open wide
Whisper my story to bring you a smile
Whisper my joy in knowing you
Whisper all of me to help you again grow strong

Whisper my love


Alison



[This message has been edited by aziza (01-05-2008 04:13 AM).]

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Clang
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1 posted 2008-01-05 01:27 AM


Lovely poem.  
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-01-05 04:00 AM


ms az....cade is blessed to have your heart this way...enjoyed you babe
aziza
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3 posted 2008-01-05 04:14 AM


Thank you, Clang.

A

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Thank you, D.

I am lucky to have Cade as a friend.  Very lucky.

A

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-01-05 08:49 AM


Beautiful love and healing whispers, dear Alison!

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-01-05 09:00 AM


superbly whispering 'write!'

[your friend is truly blessed to have YOU!]

very serious and long sustained applause!!

aziza
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6 posted 2008-01-05 01:51 PM


Margherita

Thank you, my friend.  Cade has just undergone his second kidney transplant and we are all waiting to know if his body will keep it this time.  He can use all the prayers and well wishes that anyone has to spare.

Hugs,
A

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Bruce,

Thank you.  Cade is a wonderful man and a beautiful friend.

Alison

Jaime Fradera
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7 posted 2008-01-05 02:35 PM


Ohhhhh! a fantasy to soothe, to comfort, and give one the courage and endurance sometimes needed to go out and do battle with a sometimes harsh, indifferent and uncaring world
passing shadows
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8 posted 2008-01-05 03:32 PM


Alison, wow, what a beauty! I love this!

soft and tender

a joy to read

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-01-05 04:12 PM


Whispering a prayer for Cade, he's lucky to have you there.
                                   Ida
                                      

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-01-05 05:22 PM


This one is soothing...James
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11 posted 2008-01-05 06:08 PM


Whisper this and nobody hears it..they should it is a fine write of devotion, beauty and love and i thank very much for it..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

Margherita
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12 posted 2008-01-05 06:29 PM


Saying a prayer of gratitude  for your dear friend Cade's perfect recovery. St. Paul said that we should pray and trust and do as if we had already received ...

It seems to me that your whisper poem is expanding expanding and the healing energy flows where it is needed.

Love,
Margherita


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2008-01-05 06:38 PM


Dear Ali... Cade is blessed to have you in his life... this is very beautiful, I will have good thoughts for Cade's recovery... love and hugs  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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14 posted 2008-01-13 03:57 PM


I thank each of you from the depths of my heart - Cade has had a real struggle this past week, but is rallying.  Please, think of him now and then ... and whisper a plea for his recovery.

Thank you.
Alison

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