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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2008-01-04 07:55 PM


Trust in God

In God I always put my trust
when sexy girls join me in lust,
for 'God Help Me' if I am found
when sharing all my love around.

Religious then I must remain
to shield me from the Devil's pain.
For sure in Hell I would reside
if she knew who I'd been inside!

I'm glad that God forgives all sins
it makes more sense of my life's wins,
in knowing when I finally die
I'll get a pardon from on high.

So I remain a man of God
with true religion as the rod
I carry with me everyday
to keep the Devil well away.

I love to hear the preachers say
no matter how I sin today
that in repentence I'll be born
again into a better morn.

So Devil you can go to Hell
for you can't break a god man's spell
protected by my God this way
for all my sins I'll never pay!

In God I'll always put my trust
his love helps me fulfil my lust
enjoying loving everyday
in knowledge that it stays that way....


Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

[This message has been edited by ivordavies (01-06-2008 06:24 AM).]

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kudanesh
Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
1 posted 2008-01-04 08:13 PM


now i enjoyed this erm... i just loved the wording and the way that it was put to gether

and yes god will protect you from the devil if you are truely sorry for your sins

but i love this write

ps sorry about my spelling

Fairplay
Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
2 posted 2008-01-04 11:13 PM



Ivor


Never mix your drinks

Free Spirits, Holy Spirits, High Spirits...

But remember to spirit one away before you get on with the next....

Many a "Happy Hour" can be spent with Free Spirits....

Liquor of course... I would.. be up at the Crack of Dawn...if it tasted  that good...and learn to breath through me ears.

More often than not it's overated. Blown out of all proportion....

Oh Hell.... give me the Devil any time

Eric

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-01-05 04:42 PM


I love sarcastic humor and this is sarcastic wit at it's best. I'll be watching to see how much trouble you've gotten yourself into and laughing.
                                Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-01-05 05:48 PM


Nice...the goal is to improve, but if we could achieve perfection, Jesus could have avoided the cross...James
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