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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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Drop Dead Would you really like to know when you drop dead where you may go? Let me explain so you may see how certain things are known to me. I’ve often travelled in this land that few can really understand and most don’t try to go and see except when spirits are set free. This place is not the same as here, although it’s really very near, in fact it’s just a breath away and whispers to us every day. The things I’ve seen prove this to me that nothing’s for eternity, though there life’s lived on different plains, all still continue with life’s games. For many mansions has this land, eternal law takes you in hand and places you with your own kind where all can share a common mind. But if you don’t accept you’re dead or pass with chaos in your head, sometimes you’re lost and cannot find a way to shed your tortured mind. For some strange reason I don’t know, sometimes a ‘living’ soul must go to help lost souls to find their way across the realms of night and day. But I digress, I need to tell what is this death, a heaven or hell? Depending where you’ve made your bed it can be either when you’re dead! I’ve seen the devils and the gods I fought with demons, felt their rods, been bathed in beauty by each ray of perfect love shining my way. But what I learned, at no small cost is none can change when life is lost, whatever you are like that day is exactly how you’ll stay. Where you finally make your home depends just where on earth you roam. So did you really want to know, when you drop dead where you will go? Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, I find this somehow disquieting! Ok to the paralell world/s, but it is disturbing to think that some souls don't find their way back Home easily. In the end every soul will be embraced again by the loving arms of God, I firmly believe. Of course we are what we think, so we better think we are deserving of God's love and compassion and therefore destined to Paradise ... Aren't there the Angels to accompany us? Your poem is certainly food for thought. Love and LIGHT! Margherita  |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
i think that you have put alot of work in to this poem and i realy do like it now i belive in those that do not find there way to god and i belive in those that think that they are still living and i know they are there and some time we us living can not help them they must find it out for them selves but there are those that get caught in a visious round about and will never find the door i would like to ask about these lines "whatever you are like that day is exactly how you’ll stay. Where you finally make your home depends just where on earth you roam." are u trying to say that if you are not a nice person and that you do not follow god guidline then you will pay for the things that you have done? thanks for this write like the last it was a joy to read sorry about spelling (not my good point) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, I too believe you put a lot of effort into this...well written. |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Quote "whatever you are like that day is exactly how you’ll stay...." Chuckle Chuckle....... DEAD !!! Eric |
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