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SouthernJustice
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0 posted 2008-01-04 01:16 PM



They wil ever linger, and forever fill my soul

with me through the many years
and yes I know my darling
i did bring thee many tears
and many tears of sorrow,
yet such tears now forget.
Of our time together angel,
I have not one regret.
I showed off quite a bit,
I was o such the clown
and yes I know my antics
oft left you feeling down.
But I know Jesus Has Forgiven me.
He holds me in His Arms
HE is the King of All Charisma
And truly all grace and Charm.
Before I leave my darling,
and I mean not make thee sigh.
One final kiss unitl eternity.
Tis farewell, and not goodbye


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Clang
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1 posted 2008-01-04 01:41 PM


Very sad, forlorn, but romantic.  A good piece. I liked the cadence. Enjoyed.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2008-01-04 02:05 PM


I never liked farewells or goodbyes myself

how sad this poem makes me feel, but in a way, I smiled a bit too

I guess that's what you call bittersweet


SouthernJustice
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3 posted 2008-01-04 03:23 PM


Thank you both, and it IS a "farewell but not goodbye" type poem. Good to hear from you both. "SJ"


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-01-04 03:34 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-01-04 07:42 PM


No love bond without tears!
But your words contain also a healing
message.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

SouthernJustice
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6 posted 2008-01-05 03:26 AM


TY James and Margarita. "SJ"
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