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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-31 06:33 AM



edges of moments
straight lines
and curves
pressed together
with lubricated friction

those wet sounds
of a new year
finishing her lover
and sliding her fingers
down the face of windows

some other day waiting
to be the first time
no matter how many
have been there before
perhaps this is the last

a moment when time will stop

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Ft Benning
1 posted 2007-12-31 06:39 AM


Yep...

but when it comes , it's worth it .

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-12-31 06:40 AM


thank you irish, you bless me
LeeJ
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3 posted 2007-12-31 06:49 AM


hehehehehe...

both the poem and Irish...I say no more but splendid writing...

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-12-31 06:54 AM


ms lee j...so you look forward to new years also?   (grin)  thanks babe....have a nice one..
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2007-12-31 07:47 AM


waiting for that moment~~

M

aziza
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6 posted 2007-12-31 08:38 AM


Must have to do with those swallows playing in the rain ... or something.

Wonderful, my friend.

A

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2007-12-31 10:41 AM


worth every moment of wait     Happy New Years bigD.
Margherita
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8 posted 2007-12-31 01:09 PM


That's the clou, when time stops, when you are out of time and space, not thinking, just being. BEING love.

Happy New Year, dear D., Master Poet!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-12-31 05:31 PM


ms MMs, thanks babe...and you too

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ms GS, thanks donna...happy ny

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ms az, something with glass and storms perhaps?  thanks hon....happy new year

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ms mar, you smile me how you stop time
and call it by name...happy new year lady friend

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2007-12-31 06:51 PM


lovely Mr Daark... as are you!  Happy New Year my long distance friend... love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-01-01 07:46 AM


ms R & B, thanks lady...be well, always a day ahead of me..
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