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james.bowie
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0 posted 2007-12-30 11:01 PM



As the icy cold kingdom of winter is dethroned
the revolution of springtime thaws reclaim
despoiled lands, rendered bleak and mottled by
deadening frosts and hard freezing rain that sucked
life from the very ground beneath us

A break in the clouds renders sustaining warmth
to the bone weary travelers, tired of huddling in
cold shelters from the frigid fangs of wind bourne
chills, stalking the land like angry frost giants
jealous of the warmth within our bodies

As I look to the passing crowds, the familiar
grimaces and squinting eyes have been changed
into friendly smiles, resplendent in the sunshine
that beckons the reclusive winter hermits
to bask within it's amber gaze

This is the time for forgetting the woes and laments
sustained within winters dreary fold, preparing
for the coming of summer, and beholding all the
gifts of nature magically retrieved from the maw
of a now passing season

A real man kisses his children goodnight

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2007-12-31 06:46 AM


this entire poem was spectacular...and I felt the winter cold....but the last paragraph was paramount.....

This is the time for forgetting the woes and laments
sustained within winters dreary fold, preparing
for the coming of summer, and beholding all the
gifts of nature magically retrieved from the maw
of a now passing season

well done!

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2007-12-31 08:50 AM


James~
I am so pleased to see you back sharing such marvelous pennings with us~

I reckon that cold is one more good reason that I'm glad the stork dropped me in the warmth of Florida~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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