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effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2007-12-30 09:09 PM



In the hidden place that no one sees
Behind the pile of mysteries
Where nothing is ever left to chance
Over the shoulder he throws a backward glance

‘AGAIN,AGAIN!’ the silent shout
Illuminates the shadows doubt
Hidden in plain sight for all to see

   ………..   A vision of decadent mediocrity

Perchance relevance & pertinence may be misunderstood
First you must re arrange the clutter in the trees of my mind’s wood


© Copyright 2007 John Lawrence - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2007-12-30 09:13 PM


I know it is completely off the wall for me but, having read a post by RRRR, this line would not go away until I wrote something around it.So your next challenge should you choose to accept it, is find the line , then find the inspiration.......
John

Clang
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2 posted 2008-01-01 02:50 AM


I think this is really good.
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2008-01-01 10:19 AM


Why Thank You Clang, You might like the 'wink' I am about to post then ! Happy New Year & welcome to Pip....

John

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