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Open Poetry #41

Sight

sarahsong7
Junior Member

since 2007-12-14

Posts 14

0 posted 2007-12-30 11:04 AM

Oh his majestic beauty

In my sight

His earthly form

I could not touch

His heavenly eyes

His spiritual soul

So godly in manner

Standing upright

And glorious form

Overwhelming me

And all my senses

Every time I was near

My craving to touch

The sin of my lust

Oh how I wished

Oh how I feared

It chased me away

Now drawing me to return

Return home
copyright 2007

© Sarah Stites

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2007-12-30 07:49 PM

Welcome to PiP Sarah, may you have a happy
and prosperous new year...

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2007-12-30 08:02 PM

A warm welcome Sarah & a nice opening write. May I suggest you leave the copyright & your name off the bottom of your posts as it lessens the impact of your powerful words when the eye is drawn towards it... your copyright is accredited in the footer @ bottom of post. Please do not be offended as this is simply an observation & not a criticism....

Happy New Year, John

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-30 08:33 PM

very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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