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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-12-29 05:37 PM





Torn between regret and hope,
thoughts crumbling around me
entertained by blank pages
and distance outnumbering these feelings.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2007-12-29 05:58 PM


For me, this 'write' captures "December"
(and EXACTLY how I feel) rather perfectly!

Applause!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-12-29 06:25 PM


Thank you, Bruce~~  being stuck home sick for going on 10 days now...I use to love holidays ~~ now it seems I get sick just in time for them ~~
Wishing you A Happier New Year to come

M


SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2007-12-30 11:34 AM


I do hope you are feeling better, now.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-12-30 11:51 AM


I think everyone is getting sick...changes in the weather. I hope you're feeling better though and will enjoy a Happy New Years Day

deep poem, I enjoyed

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2007-12-30 02:08 PM


powerfully expressed, thought provoking and truth be known, I think we've all been here....

hugs
Lee J.

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