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Open Poetry #41

Tomorrow

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-12-28 05:46 PM

Tomorrow
They say
There is always tomorrow
for us
To live and start a new day
But who knows
what and where will happens
pray for tomorrow
Tomorrow will come for you
and me
They say,
life is too short to live
And give away
for something you love
It is sad when you love someone
That tomorrow comes too fast
To take away from us
Tomorrow will be there
I will pray hard
for us to live
If tomorrow will bring us sorrow
tomorrow
Don't worry
let's hope and believe in tomorrow
Tomorrow

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2007-12-28 06:47 PM

beautiful and emotional. very good.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-12-28 07:09 PM

Vandana.. this is lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-12-28 07:12 PM

The several lines indicating
tomorrow
is exactly what we need to
look forward to, Vandana.

Wonderful write...
wonderful read.

Here is to
tomorrow...

and all of its destiny!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-12-28 09:52 PM

You say it dear Vandana, we really need to believe in tomorrow.

Enjoyed your write.

Love,
Margherita

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-12-28 10:01 PM

Darling vandana,

I do believe in tomorrow and I believe in a beautiful tomorrow. Thank you for this poem written from your gentle heart.

Alison

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