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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2007-12-27 03:06 PM


In Memory of My Dad

Dad didn't have much money,
That's a fact he'd not deny,
But he had love and skills and worth
That money cannot buy.

I never saw him do a thing
To bring a daughter shame.
Each of his seven children
Was quite proud to bear his name.

He was a farmer born and bred
And used to honest work.
No farm job was too much for him
Nor caused that man to shirk.

He put our wants before his needs,
He'd simply go without.
He could teach the most skilled counselor
What parenting's about.

No child of his defied him
And if we broke a rule
We learned quite early that he was
Impossible to fool.

Before he left for Heaven
These many years ago
He taught us all the simple truths
We'll ever need to know.

I know God has found work for him
To keep him happy there
And he'll be the first to greet me when
I climb that golden stair.

For he will want to teach me
All the rules I need to know
Just as he did with earthly ones
So many years ago.

By: Joyce 12/26/07



© Copyright 2007 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-12-27 03:54 PM


Joyce~
What an absolutely beautiful tribute to your father~

'He put our wants before his needs,
He'd simply go without.'


Dads are like that ... yeah, they are~

Love n' *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Yvette
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2 posted 2007-12-27 06:25 PM


I was truly touched by the content of your poem.

I think what got me teary eyed was the part about God finding him work to do, as if he could never be happy with idle hands; truly the way of a real man.

I wish there were more like him.

I thank you.

All the darkness in the universe cannot extinguish the light of a single, burning candle.

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2007-12-27 07:29 PM


Thank you, Marge & Yvette.  Yes, my dad could never be happy as an idler.  Joyce
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-12-27 08:15 PM


Joyce..this is a very beautiful tribute to your Dad.. I miss mine every day.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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5 posted 2007-12-27 08:23 PM


This is such a beatiful tribute.  Thank you for sharing it.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-12-28 01:51 AM


Wonderful thoughts for your Dad...James
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7 posted 2007-12-28 07:52 AM


"No child of his defied him
And if we broke a rule
We learned quite early that he was
Impossible to fool."

reminded me of my Dad...left me ~smiling~
So nice to see you, Joyce


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8 posted 2007-12-28 05:44 PM


good read
Margherita
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9 posted 2007-12-29 08:13 AM


quote:
I know God has found work for him
To keep him happy there
And he'll be the first to greet me when
I climb that golden stair.



Dear Joyce, I think the beautiful soul of your Dad inspired you to write an absolutely remarkable piece of poetry, for all to enjoy.

My heart always melts when I read tributes so full of love to parents.

Thank you therefore for melting my heart.

All my love,
Margherita

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10 posted 2007-12-30 04:58 PM


We need more parents like this today, Joyce.
Beautiful tribute, your Dad would be proud.
                                   Ida

LeeJ
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11 posted 2007-12-30 05:33 PM


what a wonderful tribute to  your father...and he must have been a loyal friend to those who probably loved to be around him...was he a people magnet?

Lovely poem...thanks so very much for sharing.

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