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winter haiku |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Frosted imagery Birdseed bell in cherry tree Hungry chickadee |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful, dear Kacy!!  The imagery ... the sound! Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i see the colors and the clarity too happy happy day |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks ladies! I love those little chickadees! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Oh, this is the very essence of winter! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Perfect. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
pleasantly frosty "bird's eye" view haiku! applause!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So pretty Kacy. |
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Kheya New Member
since 2007-12-26
Posts 9Florida |
I like the way you juxtapose the images of a birdseed bell and a cherry tree; the bell taking the place of the food the cherry would supply during other seasons. This makes you think beyond the moment and into the cirle of the seasons and how even when the cherry is not directly supplying sustenance it still provides by being a place food is placed for the chickadee. Nicely done. Kheya |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome, Kheya, and thank you very much for your reply! Yes, a seed bell in a cherry tree is Nature's preferred location. Thank you each, for visiting my cherry tree this winter. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-28-2007 08:02 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Very enjoyable image. Here, quail come along and pick up the seeds that fall to the ground. They're also very pleasant to watch. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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