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Open Poetry #41

Amberina

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-12-26 09:26 AM

Amberina

I wade
through the darkness
amid the deep
of syrupy silence
amberina moon
nail clutches clouds
ruffled glass bowl
yellow orange splashes
spilling vowel chatter
dripping visual sound
excited motion noise
rhythm for a poet
and if you listen
a melody is heard

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-12-26 09:35 AM

sounds like a beautiful place to be~~

love the title

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2007-12-28 12:34 PM

nicely done ... enjoyed
~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2007-12-28 05:34 PM

Helen, I like the colors and sounds this piece evokes.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-12-29 04:04 AM

just lovely Helen... Happy New Year my friend love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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