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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2007-12-25 01:31 PM


A child rides forth beneath a smiling sun
reward may be at hand 'ere day is done,
for knowledge may well be its' own reward
and walls that are too high a seeker shun.

As hope preceeds what one is moving towards,
vitality and joy are in accord,
sunflowers also bloom behind those walls
of isolation one can ill afford.

Blues skies and happiness answer your call
may splendor of this day on you befall
that you shall be renewed in mind and soul
once more to face the future standing tall.

For one must persevere to reach their goal
as surely as lifes' trials take their toll
that child may well be you beneath that sun,
for now, relax and let the good times roll!


© Copyright 2007 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2007-12-25 06:15 PM


What a great Tarot card write!

"that child may well be you beneath that sun,
for now, relax and let the good times roll!"

Perfect ending!

Nan
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2 posted 2007-12-25 07:03 PM


Rock 'n' Roll indeed..


Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2007-12-28 11:36 PM


Midnitesun,
Thanks so much, Karen's been quite an inspiration.
Doc

Nan,
Thank you, I wouldn't be being honest if I said this didn't remind me of the good ol' workshop days. Hope this finds you well, and, best wishes for the new year.
Doc

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