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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-12-25 09:26 AM


it was another man's tuesday morning
walking his lovely in public
and you were distant in your proper
with polite but a look back too
from under burly girl hair

whispering a smile with no strings
recognition of recognition
with some unravel here and there
taller than I knew you to be
stepping on elegant tiptoes

I heard the parking lot chuckle
reading my mind was too easy
but it didn't say much
as you blessed lines with shadows
and steps that could have been music

I wondered of the songs in your mind
would you have sung them out loud
if my guitar was in tune
and the strum of my hands
kept a comfortable tempo

playing lady eyes samba smooth


__________

daark


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with you
1 posted 2007-12-25 10:22 AM


"whispering a smile with no strings
recognition of recognition
with some unravel here and there"



loved this

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-12-25 10:33 AM


ms suesea, thanks babe...merry C day
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-12-25 08:00 PM


I wondered of the songs in your mind
would you have sung them out loud
if my guitar was in tune
and the strum of my hands
kept a comfortable tempo

playing lady eyes samba smooth


You bless us with unforgettable tunes, dear D.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-12-26 06:32 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend for your eyes and sounds too
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2007-12-26 07:26 AM


"I heard the parking lot chuckle
reading my mind was too easy
but it didn't say much
as you blessed lines with shadows
and steps that could have been music"

love your mind, D

M

aziza
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6 posted 2007-12-27 12:58 PM


D

This is beautifully special.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-12-27 05:52 PM


well I do like to sing Mr Daark.. I do like your words   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-12-28 06:47 AM


ms MMs..thanks babe for watching this unravel

_____________

ms az, thank you lady for the eyes and thoughts

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ms R & B, thank you for the read and touch ms

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2007-12-30 01:46 PM


you have a beautiful heart

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2007-12-30 01:53 PM


you make smiles, yanno??   hugs big d.
Irish
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Ft Benning
11 posted 2007-12-30 03:30 PM


Your craftmanship is excellent .

This is erotic in it's subtlety and superb in thought .

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2007-12-31 06:29 AM


ms inky, thanks my friend for your eyes here.


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ms gs, thanks babe for touching the sides of this

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ms irish, humble thanks to you for your read

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