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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-12-24 09:45 PM


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To compensate
For all the lights
I can not see—

For all the trees
A Christmas moon


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1 posted 2007-12-24 09:48 PM


beautiful
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-12-24 10:06 PM


Very fine, John!

most serious applause!!

TomMark
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3 posted 2007-12-25 12:30 PM


I saw the moon too. So Bright tonight.
In the light of the moon,
we sang to our friend.
It is Christmas and we wish for a miracle.

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Gaia
4 posted 2007-12-25 05:01 PM


I prefer the moonlight to artificial lights anyway.
Happy holidays, John.

Huan Yi
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5 posted 2007-12-25 07:09 PM


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Thanks all
and Happy Holidays to you

John


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Margherita
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6 posted 2007-12-26 06:20 AM


Wise and beautiful!

Love and Joy.
Margherita

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