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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-12-24 07:49 PM


     Continuum

Nothing in the
cry of a Loon,
a deep-twilight snow,
or a moonlit mountain
  forest…
suggests that Time
  is ‘passing’

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-12-24 07:53 PM


BRILLIANT!!!!
TomMark
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LA,CA
2 posted 2007-12-24 08:30 PM


exactly!!!!!!!!
aziza
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3 posted 2007-12-24 09:35 PM


and with that ...

you swept my breath away.

A

ArtSolstice
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4 posted 2007-12-25 01:45 PM


Yes! Right on target.
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2007-12-31 04:24 PM


Somehow this little beauty slipped right past me, can't let that happpen. This is so simple and yet stunning in it's depth and
brilliant observation.
                                  Ida

Huan Yi
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6 posted 2007-12-31 04:28 PM




Now this is perfect . . .

Would like to include it
in my Word file of poems by others
with your permission.

John

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