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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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0 posted 2007-12-23 09:51 AM



Eforenlervy

There’s a world
That no one knows
Yet inside of us
It grows

A place of magic
And no time
Where all your words
So strangely rhyme

There’s a heart
Within this place
And in it
Lives a rarer race

Of woodland gnomes
That sing at night
And elves and fairies
That radiate light

Giants so tall
They touch the sky
And human friends
That don’t ask why

It is in this place
Of Eforenlervy
That all of these creatures
Sing for me

So in your heart
Do you know best
The place just like this
Where your mind rests


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-12-23 10:06 AM


Welcome to Passions, I'm sorry I missed your entrance.
What a great response to Artic Winds Challenge.  Interesting write!
TD

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2007-12-23 02:38 PM


Why thankyou- i usually post in teen, but aw said i should post this here- so i did, it's nice to get a fresh audience sometimes (i do love the guys in teen though).

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-12-23 03:54 PM


Nice piece of writing...James
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-23 04:00 PM


MERRY CHRISTMAS



ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-12-23 04:02 PM


RRRR ~

Oh, yes! I too, have such a magical place ~ but I daresn't mention its name, for I've been told I would not be able to visit it again. The gnomes and fairies there are such a fussy lot ~ but I adore them!

However, I'm sure that it's alright for you to say the name of yours.

Love & Fairy Light,

EA

  


Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2007-12-23 04:12 PM


Nice write Kate. I know that place. Welcome.
                                   Ida

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