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Flipped
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0 posted 2007-12-23 07:04 AM


Had to censor part of the poem, so it might not sound right but yea..... Hope you like it, and the other poems i posted recently.




I've seen an done some stuff

That you wouldn't even attempt

As if it was a taint

Something that could make you faint

It could make your insides boil

Make your eyes glaze over an look like foil

No this isn't about drugs

It's about other things

Life and failure

Things you share together

The stuff you deal with day to day

The things you couldn't say

So many things happen

So many things that could flatten

Ones pride and self-esteem

An make it seem as if it was just a dream

That in which everything was out to get you

While you ran and wore down your shoes

You attempt to make things better

An only end up making things harder

In the end things will sort out

Not just flat out

But slowly and surely they will

Heh then you just might not need them pills

After all it's what life is all about

Dealing with your stuff then getting the hell out


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TomMark
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1 posted 2007-12-25 11:17 PM


absolutely right. Life is like this.
Have a wonderful Christmas and  some happy time.
Tom

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-12-26 10:13 AM


You did a very good job with this one.
Sometimes a situation seems hopeless and yet life itself smoothes the edges and the sun comes out again.

I do hope so for all those who struggle to find their place down here.

Love,
Margherita

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