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Open Poetry #41
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Flipped
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since 2007-11-28
Posts 8


0 posted 2007-12-23 06:43 AM


You feel as if you are just the same

Just another part of lifes little frame

It may see big to some

But it is really small

From top to bottom

It truly is a short fall

You see a long road ahead

But it might not be meant for you

Because you should be in your bed

While another wears down their shoes

Until the time comes where you must go

Go as far as you can then say hello

To the few standing at the end

Who thought they really couldn't win

The game of life in which we live

That few ever get to reach its true end

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Tears-of-Sanity
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since 2007-09-05
Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts
1 posted 2007-12-23 07:13 AM


This idea is nice and well thought, however, I have a few comments that I have emailsed to you!  I hope to read more  

Thank you!
L.W.

Tears of Sanity~

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