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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2007-12-19 09:34 AM


Such divine paradox,
one must seek for the words
to convey some slight sense
of this unspoken bond.

What exists 'twixt these two,
all may well rest assured,
far exceeds such attempts
for its' realm lies beyond.

Elevation of love
to approach a gestalt
wherein all that is shared
is revealed by a glance.

This alignment of souls
may prove pure to a fault
and exclude all but those
elements left of chance.

As with each of the signs,
even portents so fair,
when the heart's so inclined,
use some portion of care.



© Copyright 2007 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2007-12-19 11:01 AM


Okay, Doc. You are skeerin' the witch! *laughing*

You are too good at these!

(And since you are reading Tarot, does that mean I can write Rx's? --get back to me on that, k?)

But I am impressed. Yet again, you do your poetic magick to allow the undercurrent meaning to rise to the surface!

<--got me where y'want me now? huh, huh?

(Check the time, people, this is Karen sober, two sips 'o coffee and half a cig)

But anyhoo--

I yam just beaming achoo.

BEAMING y'hear?

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2007-12-19 09:06 PM


Dear Serenity,
Now, I am the one who is " beaming ". Gusundheit, for that atchoo. This is proving to be the most interesting of series
since the ol' workshop. Might I suggest a forum of your own ( since the position appears to be open? ). Just a thought, oh , and another, hey, when this is all said and done, how 'bout one that encompasses all.I'm completely ignorant of how many cards there are, but, it would seem to me to be a natural, that we combine the total number of a reading into one final piece. Extra points?
Doc

P.S.
I'm not really supposed to advocate self medication, but since it's you, what the heck, write all you want.
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (12-20-2007 10:48 AM).]

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2007-12-19 10:58 PM


Very nice, Dr.Moose, Makes me want to try one myself. Though I'm not sure I could meet the challenge nearly as well.
                                   Ida

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2007-12-20 10:45 AM


Ida,
Thanks so much, inspiration is sometimes hard to come by, Karen seems to have found a way around that.
Doc

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