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Two Rivers |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Are those our boats With their lateen sails Coming into the harbor No it is only the mist Rising up from the bay The old lighthouse horn With a low tone like sorrow Calls across the vacant sea . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ Your palette is stroked with the shades of the mist-in-crawl~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Longing to see even if some wreckages of those memories. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Another most effective and fine "Zenesque" write! I am especially fond of the ending: "The old lighthouse horn With a low tone like sorrow Calls across the vacant sea" v. serious and sustained applause!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words always impress me and this is no exception. Absolutely fantastic lines here. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The old lighthouse horn With a low tone like sorrow Calls across the vacant sea ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Much enjoyed this, John. Happy holidays to you.  |
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