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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-12-18 08:22 AM



She is the loveliest vision that I've ever seen
when she comes skipping around the bend
all dressed up in her burnt sienna gown

surrounded by golden gleams of light,
and in the early morning breathe of yawn
I hear her exhale as she releases
her whisper of hope promised
for the coming day;

and I, am but left again
to remain seemingly always


waiting for Dawn.

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Kahlil
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1 posted 2007-12-18 09:03 AM


Yes, she is an elegant reminder
to pause and listen, and thank.
Lovely writing, as always, GS

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-12-18 10:24 AM


I was blessed to see the most beautiful sunrise this morning and I stopped to thank the Creator for the moment.
Sometimes those moments are the only ones that we get in a day and I am truly always, looking for the next Dawn,

for that next moment that makes it all seem right...

thank you for peeking in.  Have a very blessed Holiday.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-12-18 01:34 PM


Wonderful...James
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2007-12-18 07:00 PM


I hear her exhale as she releases
her whisper of hope promised
for the coming day


With such soft, captivating dawn whispers you get my full attention always. Truly delightful, dear Donna!

Love,
Margherita


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-12-18 07:15 PM


Donna, may all your dawns come dancing in as "golden gleams" that Light-en up each of your days!

Love & Light!

Linda



Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2007-12-18 07:32 PM


Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

lucky
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Idaho
7 posted 2007-12-18 10:44 PM


There's a world inside this... but I will not see Dawn till I reach that other shore.

Outstanding
dale

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
8 posted 2007-12-19 12:48 PM


Lovely that you paint such beauty for eyes like mine to savor.

A

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2007-12-19 06:06 AM


"and I, am but left again
to remain seemingly always"
this says it all for me, Donna

Wishing you and April a wonderful and healthy holiday season


M

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2007-12-19 11:07 AM


Listening to the silence...
you express it with such tenderness!


Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2007-12-20 05:49 AM


Thank you each my friends, for resting your eyes here for a moment and leaving such kind replies.  

Happy holidays to all!!

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