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Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
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New Jersey, USA

0 posted 2007-12-17 06:40 PM



To the unloved.
There are those, who believe no one cares.
There are those, who believe no one loves them.  
But for the one I meant, I jot this down.
A oath, a pledge a simple reminder for you.
Whist we are only friends, and may forever be that
My heart and mind care for you, for just being that.

So darling unlove, to you I write
Upon your day, upon your night,
Now thirteen moons and more have passed
Friends for now, siblings in Christ.

~Klover.  


© Copyright 2007 Kieran Thomas Maye - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-17 06:42 PM


There shouldn't be anyone that are unloved

ARCTIC WIND

Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
Posts 35
New Jersey, USA
2 posted 2007-12-17 06:52 PM


Verily.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-12-17 07:03 PM


kindly and loving
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2007-12-17 08:29 PM



Keep the chin up Thalen, good things come

to those who wait and I feel that in the not too distant future good things will come to you. good luck.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-12-18 01:44 PM


Wonderful flow of thoughts...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2007-12-18 05:59 PM


Sehr schön!

It happens that those we love can't believe they are sincerely loved ... that's sad. Then friendship becomes a safe haven.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2007-12-18 06:28 PM


Your "oath and pledge" of "Friends for now, siblings in Christ" ~ are the words of a loving and compassionate 'poet'.

May your friend come to realize that they truly are loved. Show them this poem ~ and they will know.

God bless you both!


EA

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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8 posted 2007-12-18 06:32 PM


Touching write
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
9 posted 2007-12-19 07:05 AM


The many who don't feel love are, I'm sure, glad to have you on their side. All of us, at times, need someone to gently take our hand and bring us back into the light.

Well said.

~alyssa

Hupomeno.

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16
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NY, USA
10 posted 2007-12-19 08:00 AM


lovely
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