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Gumpy
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0 posted 2007-12-17 01:58 AM



I am........ adrift,
a castaway fighting to keep afloat
amid  the wreckage of confusion and doubt.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-12-17 02:38 AM


((((Gumpy))))

... watch out/within there is always something worth to hold on to.

Very impressive.

Love,
Margherita  

Rick
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2 posted 2007-12-17 03:52 AM


Hang in there Grumpy, find your way within yourself and tell the world of the journey you're going to take; life is what you make it my friend, soldier on and fight your battles for in the end you will win the war of confusion and doubt.
Thank you for sharing my friend, be well.

Rick


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-12-17 04:26 AM


Gumpy...  I do not see this in you my friend... I see you strong, formidable and with a presence that is what I see RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gumpy
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4 posted 2007-12-17 04:35 AM


Thank you for your replies.
I have tried to write different things latley, with no success, so I figured I'd try and and write why.

Margherita,Rick,RDB,

Thank you for you thoughts, they mean so much.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-12-17 05:48 AM


ok... so I was right... you are ok, but just asking why yes? RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2007-12-18 12:46 PM


Then I wish you clarity and direction this Christmas, along with joy and peace.  ~ Karen
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-12-18 01:39 AM


Oh, Gumpy, I just feel like reeling you in and giving you a great big, comforting hug.

This really aches.

Loving, compassionate, healing hug

EA

Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
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Earth
8 posted 2007-12-18 02:00 AM


It's hard to write positive things at times like this, hang in there, be strong, your not the only one.

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

Gumpy
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9 posted 2007-12-18 06:33 AM


Thank you all so very much for your words.
More than appreciated.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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