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Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
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New Jersey, USA

0 posted 2007-12-16 12:24 PM



Durchgriff

The human soul, is like a layer of dirt.
The actions and reactions,
Are truly only “skin deep”
Past Thoughts and wishes
Past convictions and agendas
Lies one of two things
A shell of hate and disease,
Or a fluid so pure, it stains you pleasantly,
A rich fluid red of love,
And Salvation.



© Copyright 2007 Kieran Thomas Maye - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-12-16 12:40 PM


Absolutely Outstanding!
Thalen
Junior Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 35
New Jersey, USA
2 posted 2007-12-16 12:41 PM


Thank you. Please look in Spiritual Journey for another one I posted today. :3
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-12-16 04:24 PM


"And salvation"...enjoyed the thoughts...James
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