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Two of Cups....... for Serenity

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 12-16-2007 07:10 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts


  

Once was there to share not quarrel
Love returned, his way
Acceptance from the teenaged years
A mutual love gone astray

Unfaithfulness, in past, his need
Reversal of once held deep
Today a minus of mathematical term
Each in aloneness to sleep
                        
Who knows the misunderstandings best
Or the level of deceit
No matter, time has worn it smooth
In crossing accepting defeat
            
            ~~~~~~~~~~~~

There in the future, beginnings could be
Of differences resolved (if upright)
Or maybe harmony or mutual trust
Of another to share in the night

If drawn in sympathy to the one now in need
Lay it down, pick another, for I
Would rather aloneness with memories old
Be held in affection's imply

It's all in the hands of each, you see
Two cups half empty, half full
Upright or reversed, could be love in the air
A time-line from each end that has pull.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 12-16-2007 07:23 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"It's all in the hands of each, you see
Two cups half empty, half full
Upright or reversed, could be love in the air
A time-line from each end that has pull."

smiling

everytime I think yer not paying attention, you!

I should have known better with this one.



Merry Christmas, Mo! and oh-you-get-it!


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


2 posted 12-16-2007 07:29 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

well..I am even more moody than you, K...so I have to be in the proper mood to even want to do a challenge or even write or understand another's poem...and sometimes this  eldwrly mind of mine just doesn't want to cooperate...

I guess I was lucky today~~ besides this one is my life  

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-16-2007 08:23 AM).]

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


3 posted 12-16-2007 09:41 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

v. well done 'write'!

Excluding perhaps the 'rich and (in)famous', I believe that the majority
of folks our age have lives which have veered into the 'tragic'... I have
most certainly been 'rundown' by the (alleged) "American Dream" (and
'paved over' by the "information superhighway")...leaving destroyed lives
and relationships (and 'emotional zombies' at best) in its wake!

Applause for this penning!
Artic Wind
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4 posted 12-16-2007 09:55 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

She got a good challenge going on, sounds fun!

Very much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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with you


5 posted 12-16-2007 10:18 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Lay it down, pick another, for I
Would rather aloneness with memories old
Be held in affection's imply"

loved this part....
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