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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2007-12-15 08:33 PM



~I’ve never loved anyone
like I love you~


I would never let anyone
stay long enough
for roots to take hold
and tangle my heart

except you….


a constant
   a heart beat
      a rhythm flowing

through my veins
you are electric
you are poetry

and you are
the only one
that matters
the only love
I call

Forever


~SEA~

© Copyright 2007 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-12-15 08:36 PM


beautiful heart words here SEA... enjoyed RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-12-15 08:36 PM


Lovely like the SEA! lol

ARCTIC WIND

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3 posted 2007-12-15 08:59 PM


SEA

This poem shows the beauty of your heart and the beauty of you.

A

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displaced
4 posted 2007-12-15 11:46 PM


how I've missed reading you!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-12-16 05:03 AM


"The only love I call forever."  Enjoy the sincerity of these words...James
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6 posted 2007-12-16 07:54 AM


I would never let anyone
stay long enough
for roots to take hold
and tangle my heart

except you….


When our hearts sigh in this awareness, it's a peak of emotion that truly will last into forever.

So beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2007-12-16 03:14 PM


OhLittleSEA~
You move us with your poetic beauty~

*sighs*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

SEA
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with you
8 posted 2007-12-17 08:33 AM


thanks to all of you for your sweet replies!
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9 posted 2007-12-17 09:31 PM


So very beautiful Susan.  
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10 posted 2007-12-17 09:48 PM


Beautiful sentiment.  Joyce
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11 posted 2007-12-17 09:54 PM


"you" must be smiling!

H, Robert

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12 posted 2007-12-17 09:57 PM


Daughter...

You continue to grow
in ways you never imagined.



Enjoying this you...




Lincoln
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13 posted 2007-12-18 02:10 AM


I realy enjoyed this

Fantastic

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

vlraynes
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14 posted 2007-12-18 03:42 AM


Beautiful, as always, SEA...

I've missed reading you...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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15 posted 2007-12-18 05:19 AM


Beautifully penned, words straight from the heart, dear Sea. Love it.


Charisma

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16 posted 2007-12-18 06:20 AM


ms suesea...now I know what I want to be
when I grow up..enjoyed you babe

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17 posted 2007-12-18 08:34 PM


There's my SEA! I was almost going to post a poem quite similar to this...now though there's NO WAY

Good to "see" you...you're amazing as usual!

Love ya,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

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18 posted 2007-12-19 08:01 AM


Beautifully penned!!
dgvarner
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19 posted 2007-12-19 06:31 PM


a very good love indeed...

enjoyed...
g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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Deep in the heart
20 posted 2007-12-20 11:40 AM


Just plain ole 1derful, gal

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LindsayP
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21 posted 2007-12-20 07:56 PM



You certainly sound if you are really in Love, I wish you the best of luck dear Sea
and may the sun shine upon you.

Lindsay

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22 posted 2007-12-20 08:36 PM


Boy, when your little love lights shines, its truly blinding

Merry Christmas Susan - enjoy every second.

             
Love, Joy, and Cheer!

Michael
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23 posted 2007-12-22 06:44 PM


I detect a sense of sadness to this but also one of fulfillment, maybe in knowing what you had.

Beautifully done.

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24 posted 2007-12-23 12:04 PM


I have to Say!

have A very merry Christmas!

ARCTIC WIND

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