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sarahsong7
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since 2007-12-14
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0 posted 2007-12-14 07:56 PM


Would you hold me if I cried

Would you hold me if I cried
Would you dry away my tears
Would you Gently tell me the words
That I desperately need to hear
Would you whisper in my ear
Sweet words I can?t resist
Would you turn away my love
As if it don?t exist
Would you see my tears
While I stood in the rain
Would you scare away my fears
And hold me through my pain
Would you mend my broken heart
Or dare to watch it bleed
Would you look inside my soul
And see the real me
Will you hold me if I cried
And dry away my tears
Stand watch over me
And Chase away my fears
Would you love me forever
And always stand beside
And be apart of my ever afters
Even after I died
Would you hold me forever
If even in your heart
And never let anyone
Tear us apart
Copyright  2007

© Sarah Stites


© Copyright 2007 sarah blanche stites - All Rights Reserved
moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
1 posted 2007-12-14 08:35 PM


That was very sweet...that's how I feel about my Kitten (wife)...thanks for sharing.
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2 posted 2007-12-14 08:49 PM


A true love would and more.  Joyce
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-14 10:02 PM


Enjoyed another one of your first post



ARCTIC WIND

Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 197

4 posted 2007-12-14 11:21 PM


A sweet piece. Welcome to Pip.

Type II poet. Its worth the work.

aziza
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5 posted 2007-12-15 12:10 PM


Very lovely.

Welcome.

Alison

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2007-12-15 05:48 AM


Wonderful...James
sarahsong7
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7 posted 2007-12-16 12:42 PM


Thank You


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