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sarahsong7
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0 posted 2007-12-14 07:53 PM



When the angels created
you they danced


They sang and played
with you constantly


They laughed with you and had a smile
on their faces all day


They held you tenderly in their arms
while you slept


The day you left them to be born


They cried sorrowful cries
that echoed heaven


They mourn for your return, but
they're in no hurry


They're used to waiting
copyright 2006
© Sarah Stites


© Copyright 2007 sarah blanche stites - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-12-14 09:33 PM


That was a divinely sweet write.


EA

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-12-14 10:06 PM


Lovely from the heavens lol



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Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2007-12-15 06:35 PM


A sweet angelic write   

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-12-15 07:30 PM


Sarah... divine write indeed! welcome! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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5 posted 2007-12-16 09:07 AM


Welcome Sarah to Pip!

Your first entry is really very very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2007-12-16 03:03 PM


SweetSarahsSong~

This is lovely ... welcome to PiP~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-12-16 04:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
Sunshine
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8 posted 2007-12-17 11:35 AM


Sarah,

Welcome to Passions! A lovely poem...

it brought a smile.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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