Open Poetry #41 |
Judy walks / at her own pace |
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since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
Judy walks at her own pace in the black and white of the winter woods as I wait the angle of the late afternoon sun allows a crooked tree to cast a perfect shadow then I hear her say “your shadow looks so straight” on the approach to hell there is a point where the temperature is perfect poetry podcasts, blogs and[ photopoems at URL=http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What an intriguing write! The shadow imagery and implied implications in the ending...as always, you've given the reader something to savor and enjoy beyond a single reading. (Checking this into my library.) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Your poetry never fails to intrigue me. I, also, am adding this to my library. Thank you. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely to read you again Anthony... very much enjoyed this shadow write of yours.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I happened to read this more than once on different days. You have caught my attention with this captivating write. ... I love those shadows and the thoughts they elicit. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
"allows a crooked tree to cast a perfect shadow" This is exquisite. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
This is very good John |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
The picturesque images this emotes reminds me of black and white photography. I miss seeing really great black and whites. Great write. |
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joe86s Junior Member
since 2008-01-07
Posts 10 |
mmmm delicious |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very interesting write, makes one think. Ida |
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