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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you there that way and me knowing you this way wanting you both ways and maybe even more but I will act nonchalant and just glance out windows if you will do the same pretending we don't have needs and that the wants are ok just minor inconveniences that we can handle easily by taking things in hand and leaving the love out of the cakes we are baking in our day dream ovens with ice cube lighters held at an arm's length distance ____________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you there that way and me knowing you this way wanting you both ways and maybe even more but I will act nonchalant and just glance out windows if you will do the same pretending we don't have needs" this is awesome....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe...you smile me |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You are a very nice poet ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"ice cube lighters" cool, DS |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Artic Wind, thanks for the reads and replies. ___________ midnitesun, thank you for the grin ms |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Dark Your poetry - is - (can you tell that I am thinking here?) -- it weaves as I read. The words and how you express them is uniquely you and mesmerizing to me as I read. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
but I will act nonchalant and just glance out windows if you will do the same pretending we don't have needs ah Mr Daark...you do 'nonchalant' well I see.. enjoyed RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, I think I read between the lines...thanks for wearing the weave ms ____________ ms R & B thanks lady for looking up from down there |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
this very good. It is not that dark but kind of humorous. very good. Tomtoo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this much.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mensch, du bist ein grosser Dichter! For once let me say it this way! I'll give you a hint: Dichter = Poet. Smiles and love, Margherita  |
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