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Open Poetry #41
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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-12-12 04:47 AM


The undying rythm of grass in the breeze
How the sun heats my flesh with the greatest of ease
Shells destroy the brown earth and all those within
Bodies burning to the bone amid a deafening din
Hoards of fresh berries stain my raw tounge
Once again I am happy as if I were young
Blood rains down from the crimsom sky
Should I live or Should I die?


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lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
1 posted 2007-12-13 04:04 PM


You shall live to write more...

dale

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-13 05:18 PM


Yes, live more to write more lol

ARCTIC WIND

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