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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2007-12-11 04:10 PM



A heart bleeds blood red
Betrayal
As if each drop forged
A path through every
Memory

Ripping and tearing
Until there is nothing but
Empty
Devoid of understanding
how quickly
A life can change into
Nothing

There are no tears
Just a searing
Failure
Having had dark crawl
It’s way into a soul
Silenced

Until there is only
Lonely
Broken ties

A flat line
Life

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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Just another Pete
Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74
Scotland
1 posted 2007-12-11 04:27 PM


This is so dark and reading it reminded me just how apt the name of this card is... "Lord of Sorrow" perhaps you've found the heart of him here. Enjoyed muchly. Pete
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-11 07:08 PM


I think this is a lovely challenge

ARCTIC WIND

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