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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2007-12-11 03:29 AM

Time, the ever spinning spider,
patiently weaving a web,
and all the while,
she smiles
her secret smile
and whispers,
"Come to the web....."
"Come to the edge...."
Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (12-13-2007 04:16 AM).]

chickoo007
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 70
India

1 posted 2007-12-11 03:48 AM

But then,
Time is like the country road,
With its ups and down,
So better Catch hold of time,
And Why not play merry-go-round????

Time changes and so does its stance today it may come to destroy one the next moment it can fill you with abundant joys
Nice work marchmadness the time now is indeed yours!!!
lolz way to go!!!!

Just another Pete
Member

since 2007-12-06

Posts 74
Scotland

2 posted 2007-12-11 03:57 PM

Fun poem muchly enjoyed

Of course as a spider she'll be working in base 8 so each hour will be what 74(?) minutes long.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-12-11 07:44 PM

Love your 'spin' on time!

Ida, you have such an innovative quill!

Love to you!

Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-11 07:46 PM

You have become a lovely poet MarchMadness

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-12-12 06:52 PM

outstanding!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-12-12 07:23 PM

very interesting 'write!'

or:

Time is a whirlpool,
a confused mix
of illusions and
reality,
that draws us into
infinity...

Applause for this penning!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2007-12-12 08:14 PM

Thank You all for your comments. As we get older we tend to think more about time I guess and this is kind of how I see it.
Ida

Xillus_Xavier
Member

since 2007-10-05

Posts 72
Alabama

8 posted 2007-12-12 09:42 PM

This is really good. Much enjoyed.

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