Open Poetry #41 |
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openmind Junior Member
since 2007-11-05
Posts 12 |
Id I had to start over, I'm not sure if I would do it the same time is of the essence, I'm not the one to blame This train has derailed, I have gone off track I'm in a position to succeed, but what is that I lack Staring at the hour-glass minutes keep passing by the things that make you laugh will also make you cry If I should fall behind, It is not because I have given up The world is moving to fast, I must try to adjust I'm running out of ink along with my patience Instead I'm gunning for a dream but what if i dont make it.... |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
dream--it doesn't cost a penny And moreover you can't stop living by the fear of death If dreams dont realize then there is always something better waiting round the corner Just keep your heart,mind and eyes open And btw You have a fine sense of expression keep it up!!!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Well written! And i dont thin i said to you "welcome to pip" ARCTIC WIND |
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