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openmind
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since 2007-11-05
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0 posted 2007-12-10 11:52 PM



Id I had to start over, I'm not sure if I would do it the same
time is of the essence, I'm not the one to blame
This train has derailed, I have gone off track
I'm in a position to succeed, but what is that I lack
Staring at the hour-glass minutes keep passing by
the things that make you laugh will also make you cry
If I should fall behind, It is not because I have given up
The world is moving to fast, I must try to adjust
I'm running out of ink along with my patience
Instead I'm gunning for a dream but what if i dont make it....


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chickoo007
Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70
India
1 posted 2007-12-11 10:01 AM


dream--it doesn't cost a penny
And moreover you can't stop living by the fear of death
If dreams dont realize then there is always something better waiting round the corner
Just keep your heart,mind and eyes open
And btw You have a fine sense of expression keep it up!!!!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-11 03:21 PM


Very Well written!

And i dont thin i said to you "welcome to pip"

ARCTIC WIND

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