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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2007-12-10 05:45 PM




You've asked me why I love you
I never fully understood why
but now that I have idle time thinking
Here are your well deserved reasons why

I love you because
you always smiled
when I kissed your nose
and because you refused when I tried to tickle your toes

I love you because
of your patience
and never giving up on me
and even because you are messier than me

I love you because
you always laughed at my jokes
and you would wrestle me
when I tried to stick my tongue up your nose

I love you because
you understand me
and because you would join me in extreme ballroom dancing

I love you because
you'd correct me
when I'd say creek (crick)
and because you'd humor my bad taste in movies

I don't love you because
I want you to save me

I love you because
you were ok with Mandy calling you Keefy
and because you are the answer to my prayers

But most importantly
I love you
Because I know you love me too


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2007 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-10 05:50 PM


I really Like your Work!!!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

Just another Pete
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2 posted 2007-12-10 06:45 PM


Beautiful is all I can think of to say.
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-12-10 07:21 PM


Well done

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-12-10 08:11 PM


Loving the little things about the one we love.

Sweet, charming write!


Linda

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-12-12 03:03 PM


Like your thoughts on love...James
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