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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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contemplating life much too long and.... figuring... that if this were math I would have an F I thought it better to put life to the test try to find the square root of you + me then find the difference of that minus three add it to the sum of that plus three leaving us with a number with no history now beginning with 1 and missing x then dividing that answer by xxx adding the difference of you without me then divide that by zero minus -3 sum up the total then multiply it by eight figuring out the difference in time spent looking for heavens gate you'll see that the equation isn't all about you though the problems not solved I am sure you've had your fun yet your still a long way from done functions graphed age old in infinite space no time to lie for saving face crossing your fingers that you'll get grace no need to graph the function of a linear root when you know that in real life a V for victory will get you two new suits now realising all too well that the justifications make more sense when breaking one into two... then finding what it takes to make that same half = 3 when the value of B is greater than the sum of what it takes to make me = me so if you hear whisperers yelling secrets to the sun pay no attention I'm just trying to justify 3~2~1 dividing by zero again and and then subtracting one........ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Julie, I wished I had paid more attention to math when I was in school, but I was still able to calculate that this poem stands out in its originality -- I especially liked how you "summed" things up with the last three lines! ......jo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well written!!!!!!!!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
Exponentially brilliant - really enjoyed this one  Pete |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you so much for reading this I was in sort of a daze when I wrote this..it wasn't until after reading it again that I saw the deeper meaning in it...musta been an angel... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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