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Wheres My Me
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Wheres My Me I am afraid of mornings cold when I wake up all alone I have felt this for to longand in whos arms do I belong Where on earth can she beher smile her eyes I long to see I try and try to find her sobut no further i can go Do I keep looking and across blue seasor do I wait for her to find me I've been alone for quite a whileand no one of them can make me smile There some one for evry one I here the people say my heart sinks even deeper with evry darken of the day So what do I do and where do I go with this winter and coming snow I have no on with wich to share my heart I'll keep on waiting till just fall apart Untill some one finds me I'll just lay here cold umtill that day no one to hold But one day I am sure that she will find me and I hope that she see the nice kind and gentle that I can be |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Andrew, you are so young and so full of tenderness. Don't wait and sit around cold, no! Watch out and conquer her with your beautiful heart. Play in the snow, there are surely some playmates out there! You did a nice job and I am glad that your last sentence is one of hope. Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice piece of writing about longing...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello Andrew... I agree with both Margherita and James... a nice post from you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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