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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-12-09 02:34 AM


He went to see
and when he left
he knew he had seen
what he needed to see
he looked around to find
what he needed to find

and then tripped on it almost
when he saw it wasn't there

he listened closely
for a moment for
what he never heard
then he learned what
he needed to learn

as he watched and waited and wished
that he had found love there




~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (12-09-2007 03:32 AM).]

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2007-12-09 03:39 AM


"he listened closely
for a moment for
what he never heard
then he learned what
he needed to learn"

I think I met him once!  Enjoyed this.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-12-09 04:46 AM


Julie... I so love this! thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-12-09 02:07 PM


Quite profound and cute!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-09 02:12 PM


WOW,

VERY MUCH ENJOYED

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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5 posted 2007-12-09 03:47 PM


Hi, there! Haven't seen you around for awhile.

This write was both cryptic ~ and cute!

Love can sometimes be right in front of you without you seeing it until you trip right over it!


EA

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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6 posted 2007-12-09 09:39 PM


Thank you I think mr. muse has shown up at last...

~~~kingsangel~~~

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