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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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clack clack clack the sound echos hollow throughout the dimly lit room. The only sounds are my tower unit humming softly beside my desk and the soft clack clack clack of my fingers pressing the keys. Love, admiration, inspiration... they are the topics of today... but not from you to me or from me to you that particular love can never be professed publicly... or privately. so clack clack clack the keyboard is the only one who will ever know the truth... a teardrop splashed unnoticed on my spacebar.... Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. [This message has been edited by CMGrimm (12-08-2007 12:19 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This feels so real, and so much like life. What we wish never seems to be what is. And what we wish to say, never seems to find its place in the real world. Great writing.  ~alyssa Hupomeno. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, agree, it does feel very real..... enjoyed the bittersweet feeling that flowed from this |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
thanks everybody... i appreciate it... Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Hey...good to read you! enjoyed... g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A joy to read  ARCTIC WIND |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Christopher, you took me right into your shoes for a moment. Very creative way to express your topic......jo |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks dg, AW and Jo... your comments are greatly appreciated... Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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